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Oniyuri
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| Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] ![Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] - Page 4 Empty](https://2img.net/i/fa/empty.gif) Thu Jan 17, 2013 12:34 pm | |
| Version: 0.91d Voice and text discrepancies: - Spoiler:
- "New day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Naoki speaking. He says "But it doesn't look like he was trying to get out of the way at all." while the text reads "trying to get out of the way."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Naoki speaking. He says "Wouldn't he be more likely to kill Jupiter instead?" while the text reads "Killing Dr. Johansen might be an act of revenge, but wouldn't he be more likely to kill Jupiter instead?"
- "New day" section. Exploration, Library. David speaking. It sounds like he says "I'm hard pressed to think of a way hot coffee to the face is a good thing." while the text reads "I'm hard pressed to think of a way a hot coffee to the face is a good thing."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Library. David speaking. It sounds like he says "Well I never claimed to make intelligent life decisions." while the text reads "I never claimed to make intelligent life decisions."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Main Campus. Aki speaking. It sounds like she says "Then what would you have me do? Leave me to deal with the pain of your kansei alone?" while the text reads "Leave you to deal with the pain of your kansei alone?"
- "New day" section. Exploration, Cafeteria. Chance speaking. She says "So I guess I arrived here a little after 11:00 o'clock." while the text reads "So I guess I arrived here a little after 11:00."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Cafeteria. Chance speaking. It sounds like she says "What does it matter? You're just going to suspect me anyway." while the text reads "Why does it matter? You're just going to suspect me anyway."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Shawn speaking. It sounds like he says "Oh, it really is a tragedy, isn't it?" while the text reads "It really is a tragedy, isn't it?" (I don't really know if this one counts).
Other: - Spoiler:
- "New day" section. Exploration, Cafeteria. I'm just confused about the description (when clicking on the salad) "A salad. I would say it's more my speed, but this one looks awfully wilted. I think I'll pass."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Bell Tower. Kangai speaking to Gurski where he says "If I follow our original assignment, I might be able to find a thread." maybe to "find a lead"?
- "New day" section. Exploration, Library. Talking to David. The text in the first choice reads "Did you see anyone else at the lab yesterday morning?" while the text when Kangai asks the question reads "Did you see anyone at the lab yesterday morning?"
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|  | | LazulisOutsider
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Join date : 2013-01-06
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Thu Jan 17, 2013 9:28 pm | |
| - Oniyuri wrote:
"New day" section. Exploration, Cafeteria. I'm just confused about the description (when clicking on the salad) "A salad. I would say it's more my speed, but this one looks awfully wilted. I think I'll pass." Maybe I can help with this... When someone says that something is 'more my speed' it means that it's something that is more interesting or fitting to them than something else. The reason Kan says that a salad is more his speed is because he's a vegetarian, as I remember sake-bento posting about at one point. So, a salad is more his speed than, say, a turkey sandwich, considering he doesn't eat meat. I hope that this made sense and cleared up the misunderstanding. Sorry that this had nothing to do w/ bugs, I just thought I'd try to help. ^_^ | |
| | | | Oniyuri
Posts : 20
Join date : 2012-07-23
| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Fri Jan 18, 2013 6:30 am | |
| - LazulisOutsider wrote:
- I hope that this made sense and cleared up the misunderstanding.
That cleared it up, thanks! I can't recall ever having heard the term (^_^) | |
| | | | Oniyuri
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Join date : 2012-07-23
| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Fri Jan 18, 2013 8:37 am | |
| Version: 0.91d Voice and text discrepancies: - Spoiler:
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dormitory Hallway. Li Mei speaking. It sounds like she says "I hear thoughts of another. They fill my head until I no longer hear myself." while the text reads "I hear the thoughts of another. They fill my head until I no longer hear myself."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking. The text reads "Let's see... didn't see anyone I know on they way there." while Aaron says "Let's see... didn't see anyone I know on the way here." and considering the context I'm guessing it should have been "Let's see... didn't see anyone I know on the way there." (to the bell tower).
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking. It sounds like he says "P-sure... there's a kind of dent in the back shaped like a pumpkin." while the text reads "P-sure... there's kind of a dent in the back shaped like a pumpkin." (placement of "a").
- "New day" section. Exploration, Main Lab. Phone Rep speaking (when fixing the printer). He says "Hold down the power and the stop button at the same time for three seconds." while the text reads "Hold down the power button and the stop button at the same time for three seconds."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Library. Nathan speaking. It sounds like he says "I want to be noticed so I can have a higher position." while the text reads "I want to be noticed so that I can have a higher position."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Library. Nathan speaking. It sounds like he says "If you can't understand that, I don't think I could explain it to you." while the text reads "If you can't understand that, I don't think I can explain it to you."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking (talking to him with Detective Gurski). It sounds like Aaron says "I-I didn't do anything like that!" while the text reads "I didn't do anything like that!" (don't know if the ones like this count).
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking (talking to him with Detective Gurski). He says "My boyfriend lives ten minutes from here." while the text reads "My boyfriend lives ten minutes away from here." Didn't see that one coming! (^_^)
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking (talking to him with Detective Gurski). It sounds like Aaron says "You just asked if I ever use his card." while the text reads "You just asked if I've ever used his card."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Detective Gurski speaking to Aaron, it sounds like he says "That sounds like a convenient little racket. And you're not part of this?" while the text reads "That sounds like a convenient little racket. And you're not a part of this?"
Typos, etc.: - Spoiler:
- "New day" section. Exploration, Bell Tower. Kangai speaking with Detective Gurski where the text reads "Well, Shawn was our tour guide for most of the hour, then he says went to work at the University Center." to "then he says he went to work".
- "New day" section. Exploration, Library. Talking to Nathan with Detective Gurski, where it reads "He leads the two of us find a remote corner of the library." to "He leads the two of us to find a remote corner of the library."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Library. Gurski speaking (talking to Nathan). The text reads "Dr. Johansen was planning to expell you for unauthorized access to confidential information." change "expell" to "expel".
Other feedback: - Spoiler:
- The printer was a really nice touch.
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. I am not sure whether this was intentional or not. After Aaron wakes up where he says "I want to throw up less. Does that count?" no image of Aaron is displayed.
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Once again I'm not sure whether this is intentional or not. When talking to Aaron with Detective Gurski, and Gurski asks "Have you ever borrowed Nathan's ID card?" his image is not shown.
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| | | | Oniyuri
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Join date : 2012-07-23
| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Fri Jan 18, 2013 2:38 pm | |
| Version: 0.91d Voice and text discrepancy? - Spoiler:
"New Day" section. Exploration, Main Campus. After Naoki and Aki interrogate David, where Naoki says "He didn't see Nathan until almost 11 o'clock." while the text reads "He didn't see Nathan until almost 11:00." (I mentioned this type of thing previously, but I don't know if it's really an issue, though).
Missing voices: - Spoiler:
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Main Lab. Naoki speaking (when Aki, Naoki and Kangai interrogate Jupiter). The part where Naoki says "Maybe something on the side that people would be interested in?" is not voiced.
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Main Lab. Naoki speaking (when Aki, Naoki and Kangai interrogate Jupiter). The part where Naoki says "We may have found a lead, Dr. Johansen had another project he was working on." is not voiced.
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Main Lab. Naoki speaking (when Aki, Naoki and Kangai interrogate Jupiter). The part where Naoki says "What? But why?" is not voiced.
- "Breaking Rules and Breaking In" section. Exploration, Main Campus. Naoki speaking (after being chased away by Gurski). The part where he says "But the door is locked. I won't be able to disable the alarm long enough for all of us to go in." is not voiced.
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. During Shawn's interrogation, and Li Mei enters, she says "We have found something...", but it's not voiced.
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. During Shawn's interrogation, the part where Li Mei says "There is more." is not voiced.
Commas, typos, etc.: - Spoiler:
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Main Lab. Jupiter speaking (when Aki, Naoki and Kangai interrogate Jupiter). "But, I have work to do!" to "But I have work to do!" (remove comma).
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Bell Tower. Kangai speaking to Gurski. "Well, it looks like it might provide a motive. Dr. Johansen was planning to expell one of his students." change "expell" to "expel".
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Bell Tower. Kangai speaking to Gurski. Where the text reads "Kind of hard to tell. I mean, the first part is pretty self-explanatory. Dr. Johansen was going to expell someone for unauthorized access to confidential information." change "expell" to "expel".
- "Cornered Killer" section. Where the text reads "I stumble into the wall and slide down do the ground." change it to "slide down to the ground."
- "In the Lab" section. Where the text reads "David and I are the only ones with clearance to the view security footage" change it to "with clearance to view the security footage" (swap "the"; this change would also match the voice).
I don't know whether it's intentional or not, but I'm mentioning it just in case: - Spoiler:
- "New day" section. When Aki races Naoki and Kangai to the Lab (to interrogate Jupiter), there are no images of them when they are speaking (during the "race").
- "Breaking Rules and Breaking In" section. The part where Kangai, Aki, Naoki and Li Mei go to the Lab's fire escape in order to break in, there are no images of them when they are speaking.
Other: - Spoiler:
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Main Lab. Jupiter speaking (during her interrogation). The part where she says "Maybe 10:00 or 11:00. Why do you want to know?" there is some static/noise at the end of the first sentence.
- It may just be me nitpicking, but I finally realized what was bothering me in the Gallery. For consistency, it may be nice to have "Backgrounds 01" instead of just "Backgrounds", similar to "CGs 01".
- I don't know whether it would count as a missing CG, but there is no image of only Aki and Naoki hugging (before Li Mei and Kangai joins them).
- Li Mei's text message "I will speak with Jupiter when she comes." displays even if you haven't examined the printer and asked her to stall Jupiter when she visits Aaron.
That's two endings down for me (^_^). I haven't selected some of the other choices, so I am currently busy following the other choice paths. I will let you know if I find anything else. EDIT: I nearly forgot to mention, that "skipping" issue that I experienced (where the "skipping" paused before continuing) hasn't appeared again after I restarted Yousei. | |
| | | | Oniyuri
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Join date : 2012-07-23
| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Jan 19, 2013 1:17 pm | |
| Version: 0.91d Voice and text discrepancies: - Spoiler:
- "Filter" section. Dormitory Hall, Aki speaking (after choosing "Sure. I'll wait here."). It sounds like she says "It's more like he stores up all of his experiences." while the text reads "It's more like he stores up all his experiences."
- "Filter" section. Dormitory Hall, Aki speaking (after choosing "Sure. I'll wait here."). It sounds like she says "And the fact that he's here proves this is a special case." while the text reads "And the fact that he's here proves that this is a special case."
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Naoki speaking (after choosing "Aki told me about your father. I'm really sorry."). It sounds like he says "I guess I thought that if I wished hard enough, it would just... change." while the text reads "I guess I thought if I wished hard enough, it would just... change."
- "Silenced" section. Sleep Study Room, Gurski speaking. He says "I'm going to search the building to see if anyone is here." while the text reads "I'm going to search the building to see if anyone else is here."
- "New Day" section. Student Lounge, Chance talking to Shawn. She says "We just had something to ask you." while the text reads "We just had something we had to ask you."
- "New Day" section. Student Lounge, after Kangai announces he knows who the killer is (to Chance and Shawn). Shawn speaking. I don't know if this one counts, but the text reads "Y-you do?" while Shawn says "You do?"
- "The Solution" section. Student Lounge, after picking Aaron as the killer. Chance speaking. It sounds like she says "Isn't he the one who took the photo in the first place?" while the text reads "Isn't he the one who took this photo in the first place?"
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Alleyway, after Nathan has been caught. Nathan speaking. It sounds like he says "And then she has the gall to choose David as second in command?" while the text reads "And then she had the gall to choose David as second in command?"
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Alleyway, after Nathan has been caught. Nathan speaking. It sounds like he says "She was the only one who recognized I deserved more." while the text reads "She was the only one who recognized that I deserved more."
- "Aftermath" section. Jupiter speaking. She says "Well, if there's anything else I can do for you, just let me know." while the text reads "Well, if there's anything else I can do for you guys, just let me know."
- "New Day" section. Library, interrogating David. Aki speaking. The text reads "Know what?", but Aki's voice-over repeats the same line from before, namely "We're really sorry. It was just a job. No hard feelings, you know?"
Commas, typos, etc.: - Spoiler:
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Naoki speaking (after choosing "Aki told me about your father. I'm really sorry."). The sentence reads "What is is." maybe add a comma ("What is, is.")?
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Kangai speaking (after choosing "Aki told me about your father. I'm really sorry."). 'Complete with the world's worst "Take care of him," note.' to 'Complete with the world's worst "Take care of him" note.' (remove the comma).
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Kangai speaking (after choosing "Aki told me about your father. I'm really sorry."). "I don't think a day went by that John and I didn't get in some sort of pointless fight." maybe change "in" to "into".
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Student Lounge. Kangai speaking (after choosing "Aki told me about your father. I'm really sorry."). "And that working together is always more producting than fighting." change "producting" to "productive".
- "The Solution" section. Bell Tower (after discovering who the murderer is and going to Gurski). Kangai speaking. The text reads "Went through some of Aaron's photos and found something." maybe change it to "We went through some of"?
- "New Day" section. Cafeteria, when going to interrogate your "assistant", Chance. The text reads "Chance scurries off, leaving me alone with my thoughts and group of college kids playing a board game about colonizing space." change it to "and a group" (missing "a").
- "The Solution" section. Student Lounge, after picking Nathan as the killer. Chance speaking. The text reads "Well... it guess that makes sense... but why would he do it?" change it to "Well... I guess that makes sense... but why would he do it?" (the change will also match the voice).
- "The Solution" section. At the lab with Chance (to confront Nathan). Where Kangai says "Listen, I told the Detective to meet us here." change it to "the detective" (small letters). (I believe when "the" is used before the job title and when the person's name does not follow the title, it's not supposed to be capitalized.)
- "Chasing a Killer" section. At the sleep study room. The text reads "I open the door to the sleep room and peer in." Shouldn't it be "sleep study room"?
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Back Door. The text reads "With a sudden heave, Nathan twists from from my grip." change to "With a sudden heave, Nathan twists from my grip."
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Lab, confronting Chance. The text reads "Her eyes darken, and a sudden searing pain races from my fingertips across my body." maybe to "from my fingertips through my body".
Stuff that may or may not be an issue: - Spoiler:
- "The Solution" section. Going to the lab with Li Mei and Gurski and before discovering Nathan's body, whenever Gurski speaks there is no image of him.
- "Silenced" section. After Li Mei picks up the flyer and Gurski speaks, there is no image of him.
- "The Solution" section (true ending path). At the lab with Chance, when she speaks, e.g. "Sure thing, partner!" there is no image of her.
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Back Door, after Gurski and Chance have been locked in. Whenever Gurski talks from the other side of the door he sounds muffled, but Chance doesn't.
- "New Day" section. Exploration. Gurski's message "Got the info you needed about that ID card. Come see me." still displays even after you've interrogated Nathan and Aaron with Gurski.
- When going with Gurski to interrogate Nathan and Aaron, if you try to talk to any of the characters on the "way", e.g. Aki or Li Mei, there will be dialogue text that displays something to the effect of "you can't talk to them right now". However, if you go out of your way to talk to one of the others, e.g. Shawn or Jupiter, the "Talk" action will proceed as normal.
Missing glasses: - Spoiler:
- Don't know whether it's important or not, but after enabling the option to have Detective Gurski and Li Mei wear glasses, their "Talk" icons don't reflect it.
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Alleyway, where Gurski handcuffs Nathan. Gurski isn't wearing his glasses when the option is enabled.
Other issues: - Spoiler:
- "New day" section. Where Li Mei shows Kangai Aaron's photo (on the true ending path), the text reads "Li Mei hands me a printout of one of the photos Aaron took today." Shouldn't it be "yesterday" instead of "today"?
- "New day" section. Kangai looking at Aaron's photo and speaking (on the true ending path). "Someone was there this morning, right in the middle of our time window." Shouldn't it be "yesterday morning" instead of "this morning"?
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Alleyway where Aki blocks Nathan and the text reads "Nathan levels his fractured sword at her." In the true ending path, there is never any mention of Nathan explicitly breaking his light sword (that's only in the Kangai death ending).
- In the Gallery, all the CGs with Kangai, Li Mei and Gurski wearing glasses are missing.
Finally got around to reading some of the other posts. - Spoiler:
- LazulisOutsider wrote:
- When being interrogated by Jupiter at the very beginning of the game, when she asks: 'I mean, you've seen this exact image before. Where?' If you answer: 'It was in Mr. Auten's files. I went to his house for something', as the conversation goes on, eventually, after Jupiter asks about Western State, the line 'There's a soft rapping on the glass. Some sort of signal, I suppose.' appears. If this is the player's first time going through the game and they make that choice, there is no former information regarding the mirror. 'The glass' would make no sense. The mirror is only mentioned in the 'I'm just surprised to see that this guy looks like me. That's all.' choice.
I remember mentioning something like this in the old Yousei beta demo thread. And it has been on my mind ever since. My problem may have been the fact that I misunderstood what a "sleep study room" is. Although I get it now (after googling), I am still wondering whether sleep study rooms always have one-way mirrors? If that's the case it's fine, but otherwise it may really be confusing to the players.
Feedback about the endings: - Spoiler:
- The ending with the twins, and the one where Kangai and Li Mei confront Nathan were both very emotional and moving, and it actually made me cry a little. The atmosphere (CGs, music and writing) was superbly executed.
- The ending where Nathan is killed was freaky. The first thought that ran through my head was if it didn't feel strange to draw that CG?
- Although the true ending wasn't as emotional as some of the others, I still really enjoyed it. It was touching that the rabbit was saved. And Naoki looked cool!
- The endings were quite enlightening as well.
About the difficulty level: - Spoiler:
- I don't think it was particularly hard to get all the endings (although, admittedly, I did read your advice in the first post). I just find it amusing that I always tend to get the "bad" ending(s) first (;^_^)
- If I had to take a guess, the only points that may be "difficult" for players would be finding the printer, getting high friendship with Aki, Naoki and Jupiter (specifically Jupiter) to get the twins' ending, and choosing to accept Chance's alibi for Kangai in order to get the true ending.
- Hm, I guess there's another point to mention about getting Nathan's death ending. I may be wrong about this, since it is entirely possible that I'm confusing the playthroughs, but it appears to me at this stage that when Jupiter's friendship is high and Aki's/Naoki's is low you will get the ending for Kangai's death. As opposed to getting Gurski's, which may be unexpected?
- I tried to frequently check the text message on the cellphone for the hints, but I definitely forgot on occasion. One thing I did notice though, on my first playthrough I found the printer immediately (I clicked on everything!), so there was no issue, but after that I also tried to make a point of it to only examine the printer after I can't progress further. On the paths for the twins' ending and Kangai's death ending, there was no text message to give a hint to look for the printer (granted, I may have missed it). So I kind of thought there wasn't something like that. I was somewhat surprised when I was on the path to Nathan's death ending to see the text from Naoki stating "Have you explored everything? The lab probably has a lot of important things in it." I think the text messages from Naoki in the other two paths was "Shawn doesn't seem very worried about what's going on...". (If it helps, in the path to Nathan's death, I didn't talk to Aki and Naoki beyond what was needed to advance the plot.)
- Still... I don't think there's really a problem with the game being unbalanced or anything.
General feedback: - Spoiler:
- Li Mei's expression around Chance was amusing.
- It was kind of a relief when Li Mei threw Chance's coffee away (;^_^) What a reminder about Jisei!
- Thanks for the blooper reel!
- Hehe, the cellphone strap is adorable!
- I really want to praise Deji for the art, especially the CGs. They are amazing and such high quality and... just wow.
- The music is great! There are some of the tracks that I can't get enough of!
- I really love the characters, even the ones I dislike! If that makes sense... The writing and voice acting really bring out their personalities.
- The writing, music and art make Yousei an excellent game! Thank you!
Well, that's it for me. Hopefully I managed to find all the conversation "paths", but I can't be 100% sure. If there's a new version, I'll try to run through it again. | |
| | | | sake-bento
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Jan 19, 2013 1:23 pm | |
| Many thanks for your diligence! New version will probably be up sometime tonight, and I'll definitely add extra text about sleep study rooms. I've been in a lot of study rooms, so sometimes I forget that's not a normal thing for most people. ^_^;;
You guys are really super amazing, so huge thanks for all your work. | |
| | | | LazulisOutsider
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Jan 19, 2013 5:49 pm | |
| - sake-bento wrote:
- Many thanks for your diligence! New version will probably be up sometime tonight, and I'll definitely add extra text about sleep study rooms. I've been in a lot of study rooms, so sometimes I forget that's not a normal thing for most people. ^_^;;
You guys are really super amazing, so huge thanks for all your work. (Huge thanks to you as well, sake-bento, for making great games and letting us test them. It's a lot of fun!) Cool! I'm excited to see the new changes in the next version. Yeah, these games are my first time ever hearing about 'sleep studies' and ''sleep study rooms', so that's why I reported the 'issue'. >_< I've been super busy with mid-terms, so I haven't been able to keep up with this version of the beta... So I'm thankful that Oniyuri was on top of things. (Really thankful!! ^_^) But, since all my testing is done, I'll be able to report more frequently on the new version of the beta coming out! | |
| | | | sake-bento
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:47 am | |
| Alright, new version uploading now with typo and bug fixes along with some recorded voices (where I could grab the actor). Credits updated as well. Let me know if I accidentally left you out. orz
Anyway, the gallery has been really finicky with me this whole time, to the point of claiming that the glasses alt versions don't even exist, but hopefully I managed to make it so that you can see all the CGs you've collected (non glasses versions). Let me know if that's still not working.
The new versions are still uploading, but they should be there in about an hour or so, so if it's an hour after this post then you can redownload. | |
| | | | Oniyuri
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Thu Jan 24, 2013 12:28 pm | |
| Version: 0.91e There may be an issue with the menu and the right-click shortcut. I'll admit that it can easily be an issue with my mouse (it's pretty old and gives me trouble from time-to-time). - Spoiler:
I first noticed this where you can choose between "Could you not take quite so many? I'm kind of uncomfortable with it." and "Is it like your hobby or something?" (and immediately after the choice). I right-clicked to access the menu, saved and then right-clicked to quit the menu. The menu faded away, but then it immediately reopened.
It happens rather inconsistently. I tested it in a few spots (right-clicking with a small delay in between), and sometimes it would happen repeatedly after each click and other times it would only happen after several clicks.
It didn't happen with the previous versions (I save a lot using the right-click shortcut so hopefully I would have noticed ^_^). Closing and restarting the game didn't help.
But once again, I wouldn't be surprised if it's my mouse that's on the fritz.
The extra information about the sleep study room clarifies things nicely. - Spoiler:
A suggestion: The text reads "Clearly one of those one-way mirrors they use in lab testing. Am I in some sort of study room?" maybe change it to "It's clearly one of those one-way mirrors" or "Clearly, it's one of those one-way mirrors".
I haven't gotten very far with the new version. I'll try to have a proper go at it this weekend. | |
| | | | LazulisOutsider
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Thu Jan 24, 2013 3:25 pm | |
| Version 0.91e Thoughts:- Spoiler:
~I really like the way the added information about the Sleep Study room is presented. It gives you the information without sounding forced.
~ In the 'Time to Eat' section, when David says he was born in Edgewater as well, he says 'Go Soundlings.' I think maybe it should end with an exclamation point, considering how it's spoken. He sounds excited when he says it.
~That whole thing with the CGs is strange... When I first bought the Beta, pre-voices, the CGs worked perfectly fine, glasses or no glasses. But it seems to be working fine with the 'no glasses' versions so far.
Other posts:- Spoiler:
- Quote :
- There may be an issue with the menu and the right-click shortcut. I'll admit that it can easily be an issue with my mouse (it's pretty old and gives me trouble from time-to-time)... I right-clicked to access the menu, saved and then right-clicked to quit the menu. The menu faded away, but then it immediately reopened.
Since reading this, I've tried this at several spots in the game and haven't experienced the same problem... If it does happen to me, I'll post about it.
Extra non-important stuff:- Spoiler:
~I would totally buy the music from these games. It's very powerful and sets the scene/tone perfectly!
I will edit this post with any errors/bugs I find... But, so far, it's looking ship-shape! | |
| | | | Oniyuri
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Fri Jan 25, 2013 10:59 am | |
| Version: 0.91e Typo/voice and text discrepancy: - Spoiler:
"New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking (talking to him with Detective Gurski). It sounds like he says "You just asked if I ever use his card." while the text reads "You just asked if I ever used his card." (remove the "d").
Other: - Spoiler:
"New Day" section. Twins' ending path, after being chased away by Gurski. While Aki says "Then we sneak in through the side." her image is positioned in the middle of the screen, and when Kangai says "Isn't the door locked?" her image moves to the left. It looks strange, since no other character image is displayed. I'm guessing it's because the part where Naoki said "But the door is locked. I won't be able to disable the alarm long enough for all of us to go in." (which was not voiced) was removed.
Cellphone messages: - Spoiler:
- On the twins' ending path, after having already talked to Aaron about his alibi, etc. and after finding the printer and talking to Li Mei about stalling Jupiter, the text message from Li Mei reads "Aaron still sleeps. Call later."
- This one may not matter so much. On the twin's ending path, after interrogating Nathan, Li Mei's text message reads "Jupiter came. She is truly concerned for Aaron's well being." which seems like somewhat strange timing (previously Li Mei's message read "I hope the rabbit is well.").
Just say if you need more detail on the sequence of events that lead up to the text message appearing (e.g. the order in which I talked to the characters) or something.
Previous posts: - Oniyuri wrote:
- I right-clicked to access the menu, saved and then right-clicked to quit the menu. The menu faded away, but then it immediately reopened.
I've been trying this again, and I couldn't reproduce the issue today. So it really looks like it's my mouse... orz - sake-bento wrote:
- Alright, new version uploading now with typo and bug fixes along with some recorded voices (where I could grab the actor).
Just confirming if I should ignore previously reported voice and text discrepancies (and assume you're trying to contact the voice actor)? - LazulisOutsider wrote:
- ~I would totally buy the music from these games. It's very powerful and sets the scene/tone perfectly!
I concur! (^_^) | |
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Fri Jan 25, 2013 11:11 am | |
| While I am trying to get all the actors (some being very far out of town), I did try to either remove or reassign all the lines previously reported in case I can't get them in time. So if you still find something weird, let me know. | |
| | | | Oniyuri
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Jan 26, 2013 3:02 pm | |
| Version: 0.91e Okay, I'm mentioning the previously reported stuff that are still there, just in case they were missed. Previously reported typos, etc. that are still there: - Spoiler:
- "Cornered Killer" section. Where the text reads "I stumble into the wall and slide down do the ground." change it to "slide down to the ground." ("d" to "t").
- "Settling In" section. Lab, Aaron speaking. "Then you're with me, now." to "Then you're with me now." (remove the comma).
- "Filter" section. Dormitory. "Aki wrinkles her brow. She defintely looks troubled." to "She definitely looks troubled." (missing "i").
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Bell Tower. Kangai speaking (to Gurski). "I mean, the first part is pretty self-explanatory. Dr. Johansen was going to expell someone for unauthorized access to confidential information." change "expell" to "expel".
- "New day" section. Kangai looking at Aaron's photo and speaking (on the true ending path). "Someone was there this morning, right in the middle of our time window." Shouldn't it be "yesterday morning" instead of "this morning"?
Previously reported voice and text discrepancies, etc. that are still there: - Spoiler:
- "Awake again" section. Sleep study room, Li Mei speaking. It sounds like she says "You are both scared and confused, and you're mistaking it for anger." while the text reads "and you are mistaking it for anger."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking. It sounds like Aaron says "Let's see... didn't see anyone I know on the way here." while the text reads "Let's see... didn't see anyone I know on the way there." and from the context "there" (to the bell tower) would be correct.
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking. It sounds like he says "I-I shouldn't." while the text reads "I shouldn't."
- "New day" section. Exploration, Dorm Room. Aaron speaking (talking to him with Detective Gurski). It sounds like Aaron says "I-I didn't do anything like that!" while the text reads "I didn't do anything like that!"
- "New Day" section. On true ending path. Student Lounge, after Kangai announces he knows who the killer is (to Chance and Shawn). Shawn speaking. It sounds like Shawn just says "You do?" while the text reads "Y-you do?".
- "New Day" section. Exploration, Main Lab. Jupiter speaking (during her interrogation). The part where she says "Maybe 10:00 or 11:00. Why do you want to know?" there is some static/noise at the end of "Maybe 10:00 or 11:00."
- "Chasing a Killer" section. Back Door, after Gurski and Chance have been locked in. Whenever Gurski talks from the other side of the door he sounds muffled, but Chance doesn't.
Don't know if you decided to leave it as is, but in case you didn't: - Spoiler:
- "New day" section. Exploration, Bell Tower. Kangai speaking to Gurski where he says "If I follow our original assignment, I might be able to find a thread." maybe to "find a lead"?
- "The Solution" section. On Nathan's death ending path. Bell Tower (after discovering who the murderer is and going to Gurski). Kangai speaking. The text reads "Went through some of Aaron's photos and found something." maybe change it to "We went through some of Aaron's photos"?
- Gurski and Li Mei's "Talk" icons do not reflect it if the "glasses option" is enabled for them.
Cellphone messages: - Spoiler:
- If you decide to take the printouts to Gurski so that he can find out whose ID it is:
After talking to Gurski about the ID and he said we should go interrogate Nathan, the text message from him still reads "Got the info you needed about that ID card. Come see me."
Then after talking to Nathan and before leaving the library the text reads "We're talking to Aaron now, right?"
After leaving the library (and before talking to Aaron) the text message again reads "Got the info you needed about that ID card. Come see me."
After interrogating Aaron and before leaving the dormitory the text message reads "Let Aki know that she and Naoki need to talk to David."
After leaving the dormitory (and before talking to Aki) the text message again reads "Got the info you needed about that ID card. Come see me."
- This is just about the hint concerning the printer (the text message from Naoki that reads "Have you explored everything? The lab probably has a lot of important things in it."):
The text message, "Have you explored everything? The lab probably has a lot of important things in it", is displayed after talking to Naoki as long as you don't select the option to talk about the twins' family (after which the text message will read "Um...sorry if I made you feel uncomfortable talking about our history. ^_^;;") and/or the option "Turns out Nathan really wanted to be in charge of the lab, but Dr. Johansen appointed Jupiter instead." (after which the text message will read "Shawn doesn't seem very worried about what's going on, but I think it's just a show of confidence to keep the students calm.").
If you go and talk to Gurski, Naoki's text message will read "Everyone here seems to think Dr. Johansen's death was an accident. D:" instead.
So there is, depending on the actions the player selects, a very small window to actually see the message/hint about exploring the lab and it may be easily missed.
Small new suggestions: - Spoiler:
- "Filter" section. Dormitory Hallway. Aki speaking. The way she says "He's a detective, but he doesn't have a partner." sounds like a rhetorical question, so maybe it should end with a question mark ("He's a detective, but he doesn't have a partner?").
- "New day" section. Dormitory Room. Aaron speaking. "That was not a thing I wanted to see ever." maybe to "That was not a thing I wanted to see... ever." (the way it is said sounds like there is a pause).
- In all the game text that I can remember right now, there is usually a space after an ellipsis, but in the text message from Naoki that reads "Um...sorry if I made you feel uncomfortable talking about our history. ^_^;;" there isn't one.
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| | | | Oniyuri
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sun Jan 27, 2013 7:36 am | |
| Version: 0.91e Ugh... sorry, it looks like I missed quite a few stuff the previous round. A few voice and text discrepancies that I missed previously: - Spoiler:
- "Settling In" section. Lab. Aki speaking with her kansei. It sounds like she says "Or he might be even less willing to talk to you." while the text reads "Or might be even less willing to talk to you."
- "In the Lab" section. Sleep study room. Gurski speaking. It sounds like he says "Are you sure you wanna know?" while the text reads "Are you sure you want to know?"
- "In the Lab" section. Main Lab. Naoki speaking. It sounds like he says "It's just that... I noticed the hair is different. He doesn't have the black on the ends." while the text reads "It's just that... I noticed the hair is different. His doesn't have the black on the ends."
- "Time to Eat" section. Main Campus. Li Mei speaking. It sounds like she says "There is fear and frustration, but they're too close." while the text reads "There is fear and frustration, but they are too close."
Other voice and text discrepancies that I missed previously, but I don't know if they really count: - Spoiler:
- "Settling In" section. Dormitory Room. Aaron speaking. It sounds like he says "Ah, those are for you. You can unpack before we go to the lab." while the text reads "Those are for you. You can unpack before we go to the lab."
- "Settling In" section. Dormitory Room. Aaron speaking. It sounds like he says "Ah, you'll get used to it eventually. Everyone does." while the text reads "You'll get used to it eventually. Everyone does."
- "Death's Call" section. Bell Tower. Aaron speaking. It sounds like he says "No... I-I don't... I don't know!" while the text reads ""No... I don't... I don't know!"
- "Death's Call" section. Bell Tower. Aaron speaking. It sounds like he says something to the effect of "No no no no, y-you don't get it! It's Dr. Johansen!" while the text reads "No no no no, you don't get it! It's Dr. Johansen!"
- "New Day" section. Dorm Hallway. Li Mei speaking. It sounds like she says "Th-the rabbit. I wanted to know if it is well." while the text reads "The rabbit. I wanted to know if it is well."
Ellipses that aren't followed by a space: - Spoiler:
- "In the Lab" section. Main Lab. The text reads "The room falls silent and I struggle for something to say. Or do. Or...I don't know."
- "Time to Eat" section. Cafeteria. Kangai speaking. "Um...this school is neat?"
- "Time to Eat" section. Cafeteria. Kangai speaking. "At the lab...she called me Kangai."
- "New Day" section. Student Lounge. Kangai speaking (to Naoki). "Really? So...do you watch horror movies or anything?"
- "New Day" section. Main Campus. Aki speaking. "So...any negative feelings still brewing?"
- "New Day" section. Main Campus. Aki speaking. "Hmm...Prince Shawn...ing?" (x2)
- "New Day" section. Main Campus. Kangai speaking to Aki about breaking into the biology building. The text reads "...I probably should have guessed that."
- "New Day" section. Main Campus. Kangai speaking (to Aki and Naoki). "Let me guess...aerivation?"
- "Cornered Killer" section. The text reads "...but the impact never comes."
- "The Solution" section. True ending path. When choosing Chance as the killer. The text reads "...right."
- "The Solution" section. True ending path. When choosing Jupiter as the killer. The text reads "...I should have known that."
- "Aftermath" section. Kangai speaking. The text reads "...and then she and Shawn took off."
Commas that can be removed: - Spoiler:
- "New Day" section. Cafeteria. Kangai speaking (to Chance). "Um... you and I were in both places, too..."
- "New Day" section. Cafeteria. Kangai speaking (to Chance). "But he helped catch the killer, too."
- "New Day" section. Back Door. "The back door is locked, too. Obviously."
- "New Day" section. Main Campus. Aki speaking "Let's get going, then."
- "Breaking Rules and Breaking In" section. Back Door. The text reads "I don't want to admit he's right, but Gurski's attitude during this case has me on edge, too."
- "New Day" section. Dorm Hallway. "That day, again. Why do I keep thinking about it?"
- "Filter" section. Dorm Hallway. Aki speaking. "I assume it's working for you, too."
Typos, etc.: - Spoiler:
- Main Lab. Clicking on the petri dishes. "I'd better not touch. I don't want to be Patient Zero." to "I'd better not touch it. I don't want to be Patient Zero."
- Bell Tower. Kangai speaking to Gurski, the choice reads "So, get anything on the note?", but when Kangai asks the question the text reads "So? Get anything on the note?"
About the gallery: - Spoiler:
Well, I'm not sure how the Gallery is supposed to behave currently. I cleared out my persistent data and save games to check. Also, for each of my subsequent playthroughs (one for each of the four endings), I made the choice for Kangai to wear glasses. Except for some CGs from the Kangai death ending, none of the CGs where Kangai features were unlocked (neiter non-glasses nor glasses versions). The screenshots show the missing CGs after the Kangai glasses playthroughs. ![Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] - Page 4 Cgs_0110](https://i.servimg.com/u/f15/17/67/85/73/cgs_0110.jpg) ![Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] - Page 4 Cgs_0210](https://i.servimg.com/u/f15/17/67/85/73/cgs_0210.jpg) For the next set of playthroughs, Kangai didn't wear glasses. I haven't confirmed it for all the CGs, but it seems that if Kangai doesn't wear glasses, but Li Mei does, then the CGs featuring her are not unlocked (nether non-glasses, nor glasses versions). If I recall correctly, the non-glasses version for Gurski handcuffing Nathan was unlocked even if Gurski wore glasses. If nobody wears glasses, all the CGs are unlocked.
That should be it for this version. | |
| | | | LazulisOutsider
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sun Jan 27, 2013 8:08 pm | |
| - Oniyuri wrote:
- That should be it for this version.
Wow. You're really quick! I was just about to report some of the stuff you posted, but you beat me to the punch. ^__^; I haven't noticed anything that hasn't been mentioned. But, I'll keep looking. - Spoiler:
- Oniyuri wrote:
- For the next set of playthroughs, Kangai didn't wear glasses. I haven't confirmed it for all the CGs, but it seems that if Kangai doesn't wear glasses, but Li Mei does, then the CGs featuring her are not unlocked (nether non-glasses, nor glasses versions).
If I recall correctly, the non-glasses version for Gurski handcuffing Nathan was unlocked even if Gurski wore glasses.
If nobody wears glasses, all the CGs are unlocked. I noticed this as well. The gallery is being quite difficult for some reason... It doesn't seem to like the glasses options.
Also, is there an opening-cinematic-type-thing for this game? I'm just wondering if it should be playing when starting a new game or not... (I quite liked the ones in the other 2 games. ^_^) | |
| | | | tantei okuoku
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Thu Jan 31, 2013 12:39 pm | |
| hey I noticed that you are going to do a physical release for Jisei and kansei as a combo pack. I am a seller on amazon who can post (practically) anything on amazon, and could help you with that if you want me to. also wanted pop in and say thank you for allowing me to beta test yousei, I just read all of kansei and once I get some time I will read through yousei and report any problems I find in it. | |
| | | | Mari
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Feb 02, 2013 12:59 am | |
| So, I've gone through and done pretty much all the choices now, unlocked two different endings, and am just trying to figure out what I missed for the last 6 CGs in the first CG tab  I'm also apparently missing 1 song and 2 of the unlocks (I only have Li Mei with glasses unlocked), but I'm guessing these are all together so... But yes, I will mostly go into more detail in the spoiler tag. - Spoiler:
So, the first ending I got was when you successfully capture Nathan and Alex/Kansai doesn't die.
And the other ending was when he dies after Li Mei tried protecting him.
I actually had a crazy theory Li Mei could possibly be a re-engineered version of his sister and since she may be a robot or have some robotic parts (the wires?), maybe that is possible? Similarly, since her hair is all white and from what Aki said--it's possible that's from a lot of stress. Though, her eye color is technically a bit off. Regardless, they seem to have the same style of bangs.
It was nice to learn more about Aki and Naoki. I hope we continue to hear more too.
It seems Shawn knows more than he lets on considering the first ending I got. Plus his reasons for being with Chance that he wouldn't go into... Considering how friendly Chance acts (I'm still sad she's evil =( oh well, at least Jupiter is awesome), I guess I shouldn't be surprised about Shawn... I suppose they are perfect for eachother >_>
But yeah, I'm glad I went with the Chance assistant thing to start... Considering I know she pretty much killed you in the first one if you didn't keep her in the loop. I wonder if the coffee that Li Mei dumped was drugged too. Glad that Kangai noticed the oddness about her and the fact that she knew that name.
Though, if the power comes from Dragon's Blood--there is the question of how Aki and Naoki got it (or if there's more than just that)
Only thing I really have to say is figuring out who it was seemed pretty much lined up. Like even the very slight things that may have said otherwise was kind of overshadowed by how much Nathan seemed to say PICK ME. Even his excuses of why it couldn't be him seemed off. Of course, the fact that it lets you pick from everyone and only picking Nathan goes anywhere confirms it XD I did go back to see if maybe there were under endings through there after picking Nathan for the endings I got, but nope.
But yeah, I've gone through a few times now and not sure exactly what I should do differently. Regardless, I'm looking forward to the next installment~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Feb 02, 2013 1:12 am | |
| Thanks for playing! For the other two endings... - Spoiler:
One ending is very similar to the true ending, except you don't bring on Chance as an assistant. If you don't keep a close eye on her, things go differently. You can either end up with the Li Mei ending (which is what unlocked her glasses), or you can get the other one if you side with Gurski on any conflict and stay honest with him.
The other ending involves building up as much rapport as you can with the twins AND Jupiter. Get them to be friendly enough with you that they want to come along to interrogate Jupiter. If you built up enough trust with Jupiter (generally by telling the truth or being a reasonable person), she'll volunteer extra information.
As for the Nathan thing, there's kind of a joke about that in the blooper reel. >.>
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| | | | Mari
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Feb 02, 2013 1:20 am | |
| You're welcome  It was a lot of fun! - Spoiler:
Alright, should be able to get the Gurski one without many changes. I know when I did the one without Chance as an assistant, I mostly picked the opposite choices I did while doing it while the first time, I mostly did go with Gurski and tell him the truth.
Edit: Or not. Went with Gurski for everything and I somehow still managed to fail this XD
Edit 4: failed again </3
Edit 5: Got it! So creepy T__T
I'm not sure what more I can do for befriending the Twins, but I could try doing more with telling Jupiter the truth while also progressing towards the good ending @-@
Edit 2: And I manage to get this one now XXD When I thought it'd be harder... okay, shall finish this off and then try the first one again~
Edit 3: Okay, despite finishing that, getting them to come with me, and getting more information from Jupiter, the ending didn't seem any different and it doesn't look like I unlocked anything new @-@ time to try Gurski's ending again though.
Edit 6: Okay, so after another trial and error, I'm guessing I'm doing something wrong on Jupiter's end, but not entirely sure where. Edit 7: FINALLY got it! Yay! XD As expected, I had to play around with the second and third choices with her @-@ Super sad though  - Spoiler:
I hope he eventually tells them about that :/ I wonder if there was anything about Alex's real parents too.
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| | | | Kurocha
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:35 pm | |
| I just bought Yousei, so admittedly I haven't read through the other logs to see if this has been addressed for fear of spoilers, so ignore me if it has. It's not really a problem, just something I'm asking for the sake of convenience.
Version: 1.0a
OS: Windows 8
Taking Screenshots:
Is there a way to change where screenshots are saved to? I was trying to take some, but none of the files were actually showing up where they said they would be, so it just kept trying to write to screenshot0001.png repeatedly. I realized this was because my copy of Yousei is installed in the program files area, and I think that requires administrator permission to write into.
There's an easy workaround to this problem, which is just to run the program itself as an administrator so it has permission to create files in the game folder, but if there was a way to change the screenshot file location that would be easier. It would also be nice for organization, since the files just go straight into the main folder when someone might want to just have them save straight into a screenshot folder.
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| | | | sake-bento
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Sun Feb 03, 2013 8:53 pm | |
| Hm, I don't know if there's a way to change where screenshots are put, but I will ask PyTom if that's possible. | |
| | | | Oniyuri
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Mon Feb 04, 2013 8:03 am | |
| Congratulations on the release! ^_^ | |
| | | | Szacun
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Thu Feb 07, 2013 3:48 am | |
| And once again next part of the series manages to be better than last, which is amazing. It's kinda weird how it was only a week in-game time, but I already have problems remembering some details  . The different endings make it seem that your choices really matter, and aren't that hard to figure out (although some kind of hint, like the fact there's a "Gurski ending" or "Twins ending" would be nice). Spoiler: Being an utterly evil and cruel person, I especially enjoyed the ending where Nathan's body is used as answering machine. On the other hand, I'm not the fan of drama, so I found a twins ending a bit annoying. But it's cool- it shows that there's something for everyone!All in all, the mystery is nice, but some more clues, even misleading ones (ESPECIALLY misleading ones) would be nice. Having to use examine function only once is kind of a waste. The voices were good as usual, from the new ones i especially like Aaron - it's interesting, characteristic and i think it fits the character nicely. Not much to say about music, it was OK, as it should be with background music. One nitpick: in true ending, when chasing after the killer, the music is somewhat unfitting (this "take it easy stroll" tune). I got what i was expecting: well polished, interesting VN that can be completed in 1 day (which is good, because i really should be working on my thesis right now....). Thanks! | |
| | | | Deji
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| | Subject: Re: Yousei Feedback [Spoilers] Fri Feb 08, 2013 4:54 pm | |
| - Oniyuri wrote:
Feedback about the endings:
- Spoiler:
- The ending with the twins, and the one where Kangai and Li Mei confront Nathan were both very emotional and moving, and it actually made me cry a little. The atmosphere (CGs, music and writing) was superbly executed.
- The ending where Nathan is killed was freaky. The first thought that ran through my head was if it didn't feel strange to draw that CG?
- Although the true ending wasn't as emotional as some of the others, I still really enjoyed it. It was touching that the rabbit was saved. And Naoki looked cool!
- The endings were quite enlightening as well.
Late reply is late, sorry ^^; - Spoiler:
I actually enjoyed drawing that CG a lot x'D Also the LiMei's ending CGs with the slashing and the blood and all I think the most difficult one to draw was the crime scene CG, where you only get to see Johansen's hand/arm and a lot of blood... I actually did a lot of research on that one and a few... graphic sketches... ugh... But in the end I decided it was better to not be too graphic and just stick with that ^^; (though I noticed some inconsistency with the narration later on, saying the identity of the corpse was confirmed via the reconsntructed fingerprints from what was left of the body, so the complete hand there didn't make much sense, I guess ^^;;; Personally, I've always liked blood in general (not gore or looking at photos of dead people/animals or anything like that, though... - I can't even watch violent bloody movies - how do I explain... I find blood kind of beautiful?... And I enjoy watching forensic shows a lot, haha ^^; ), but I have to say that researching for this chapter made me a lot less squeaky about bloody crime scenes and gross/bloody wounds than I used to be, haha ^^;;
I'm happy you enjoyed the art! While looking at it now I think I could have done some things better, I'm really proud of it and i hope to keep improving for next installment of the series ^___^ | |
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